It took guts to post this
Dude, I'm just going to say that you've got some guts for submiting something like this, and I really admire that. I've often tried to make movies or comics with a good scriptual message, but I'm just not talented enough.
Anyway I know you're going to take some flack for making this movie, and doing anything about "religion" is taking a big risk, but don't let people discourage you.
Over all, the graphics could have been prettier, and the movie wasn't very lively, but the somber attitude went with the purpose of the moive.
Just be careful and have some friends watch and review movies before you post them to make sure you don't accidently say something you didn't mean to, or come off wrong (I've had that problem in the past)